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womble



Joined: 15 Feb 2007
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Location: Abu Dhabi - UAE

PostPosted: Fri Jul 03, 2015 9:22 am    Post subject: Happy Dependence Day Reply with quote

My short story Happy Dependence Day is up at Everyday Fiction, if you'd like to have a read and make a comment.

http://www.everydayfiction.com/happy-dependence-day-by-paul-a-freeman/#disqus_thread

Welcome to The Twilight Zone.

W Razz
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delph_ambi
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 03, 2015 9:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice one Cool
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Bob Smith



Joined: 03 Dec 2008
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 03, 2015 12:09 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Nice story Paul. I've always liked the alternate history idea, 'what would the world be like if ...'.
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Location: South Hertfordshire, UK

PostPosted: Sun Aug 23, 2015 4:21 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Hi Paul.

Great story. Sorry I missed it first time around. Been rather distracted by my wife's health problems (now resolved at last, following surgery, we hope). And reading for my uni course has meant I've had to be very selective with my reading time. I have glanced occasionally at EDF content (sorry, missed your story) and been rather underwhelmed by the quality of those I have started reading, to be honest. I did try to comment on the EDF site just now, but Disqus doesn't like me. I was one of the top posters a few months ago, but now it thinks I'm a beginner. I find it an out-and-out pain to deal with.

Good to see you're still turning out the high quality work.

Rock on Womble!

Cheers

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