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flirtybee
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 7:31 pm    Post subject: More fibbing... Reply with quote

Woo hoo!

sent off two fibs to the Fib review(limit is two per author)...one is definitely in the next issue...the other is rated a 'probable'.

Now...i have a wee dilemma which i hope you guys can help me with...

the fib thats been accepted, the editor isnt sure whether its better with or without the last line...it works both ways.

see what you think!

Rainy daze

drop
by
drop the
rain pours in
drips that mount up to
a torrent in pieces less wet
the gaps between never seem big enough to slip through


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Val Bonney
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 7:54 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

My preference is without the last line. Nice one, Flirty! Smile
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Helen



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PostPosted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 8:23 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Congratulations, Flirty. Very Happy

I'd echo Val's sentiments.
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